No Ghost

I follow you down your twisting alleyways

Let me fall through the clouds of your words

Easy

Lets treat these days as if they were our last

These dreams as if they were not the past

I play my song for you

From the jukebox in my corner

Of my mind 

Its free from the ghost baby 

So don't cry 

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Neal S,
"No Ghost"
I see process of experience within your words."I follow you down your twisting alleyways.Let me fall through the clouds of your words; easy."
I identify with your theme; A place in our hearts where we can look at the meaningful past and maybe see it in a way that is easy. But this only comes with the process of time.
The end says very much and is hard for me to assimilate but it shows the need to emotionally process on the part of the writer.
I am glad you wrote this and I wish you good and joy in your life experience. Please know that I appreciate your open and transparent sharing. I hope others read it and are somehow encouraged in their own pain whatever that may be.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Christian Bonoan]

This style may be very different from what I do but I am liking the flow of it.
About the content, it's not enough for me, I need more of this to feel what you want us readers to feel.
Anyway, thank you for sharing this poem, keep it up :)

[Neal S]

Thank you for reading it Christian.

[Chris]

This one MAY be asking too much ...I want to think on it a bit.

[Neal S]

Thank you for taking the time. Would enjoy your thoughts in the future.

[Chris]

I guess it is all in the speaker's focus. If I lean toward it as a listener - I've my own thoughts/tears/vision(s) to deal with as we always have.