Vowels Push Out

All the vowels push out to call your name

The calm of  your brow, could set my whole world      aflame

My stance takes on that of a childish daughter 

As a lifetime of reflection compresses to one drop of water

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Vowels Push Out"
Neal S.
"Vowels push out" like a waterfall pressed up against a bank of debris at it's edge. "To call your name" The soul holds what gave it spice and life; directive. "The calm of your brow, could set my whole world aflame."Who is known well does not have to try so hard to attract attention, for we come to know one another's souls."My stance takes on that of a childish daughter" Standing, vulnerable; hoping waiting to be welcomed and loved. "As a lifetime of reflection compresses to one drop of water." The culmination of lifetime's memory; of seasons, of layers of life together, be it family, loved ones, friends, spouse. etc and etc. I hope I was not to far off but this poem got me going and I loved it!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Papaya]

You always end so beautifully, this feels sad to me.
One tear?

[Neal S]

Yes one tear. Damn you're good

[Papaya]

It's lovely. I've shed a few so I'm familiar with those wee droplets.

[Valentine]

I really like the last line of this one. Looking backward and reflecting gets smaller with time. Valentine

[Neal S]

Thank you for the review Kathie..