Don't Come Any Closer

Wait

Don’t

Come 

One

Step 

Closer

This is something you can’t see

Something you can’t feel

How 

Much 

Can I bleed

These 

Words 

Don’t make any music

You 

Can’t 

Understand this 

Reviews

[Enigma Monster]

Very moving. No one can truly understand the pain of another. They can perhaps relate, then again, perhaps not.

[Neal S]

Indeed. Thank you for taking the time.

[PhoenixDown]

LOVE the vibe here.

"This is something you can't see."
Great line.

[Neal S]

Thank you Sir.

[Ken Simm.]

An oblique look at personal pain and yet I empathise. Stark and terrifying when this happens but written so well.

[Neal S]

Thank you so much Ken.

[Paul Bell]

Just go for a long run myself, in the hope no one catches me.

[Neal S]

Indeed. Thanks Paul.

[Shannon]

This one hit me rather hard today. A pain so difficult it can't make poetry? An attempt to protect someone from pain or hide in shame?
Tugs at that want inside to soothe or at least bear witness. Few words well used.

[Neal S]

Thanks so much! :)

[ajelly]

The format of this worked for me.
Really
Liked
It

[Neal S]

I'm happy you did! Thanks for the review!

[D Connolly]

I definitely need to feel my own pain sometimes and just want to be left alone.

[Neal S]

Sometimes it's just best that way. Thanks D.

[Valentine]

I believe we all have been through times like this when we just want to be left alone. Valentine

[Neal S]

Indeed. Thanks for reading.

[HeyJadeXO]

Neal I'm loving the vibe of this one.

[Neal S]

Cool Jade. I'm glad you like it :)

[aLittlePain]

I get this...uttered words similar a time or two. some honest real talk. Nice one bruv

[Neal S]

Thank ya ma'am!

[aLittlePain]

Keep slaying