Luminous Lovers

I am like no one else

Because you love me

Light rains over us 

Where shade once rested 

I hunger for your pale desire

Thirsting for the crushing depths 

Of your womanly grace

Surrender 

Now be still

Hear my words caressing you

An untied knot 

A flowering creation 

Newly born  into my hands

We sail across crystalline sky 

Your beauty  

Demolishing stars as we pass

Luminous lovers 

Devouring the night 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Superb Neal. From the first lines, you start with the positive of knowing you are made from these thoughts and moulded uniquely by being in the presence the unnamed luminous one, who has made you a better you for knowing them. These are the words that change our perspective and make us wonder what we ever were before the clarity they brought into our lives. All brilliant, but ended perfectly, giving us hints of how much that person means to you, as the story continues beyond the last line. Excellent.

[Neal S]

Thank you so much Nemo. A very kind review.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"I hunger for your pale desire
Thirsting for the crushing depths
Of your womanly grace
Surrender"
Enchantingly beautiful! I loved the sensual touch to this! Good work! ☺

[Neal S]

Thank you :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Giulia King]

"We sail across crystalline sky
Your beauty
Demolishing stars as we pass" Beautifully written!

[Neal S]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.

[Ken Simm.]

Wonderful. Thematic and a shining paean.

[Neal S]

Thank you Sir. Glad you enjoyed it.

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write, the imagery, the flow but sometimes you have to let the hand do the talking, the tracing of her contours,the feel of her warmth, the placement of appreciation is to her heart.

[Neal S]

Agreed Andrew. Thanks for the review!

[andrew mitchell]

you are welcome, i enjoy your writes even though i don't always comment!

[Neal S]

Well thank you so much for taking the time to read them.

[Valentine]

A very romantic write. Valentine

[Neal S]

Thank you :)

[FIN]

This was so gently written.
Lovely piece, one of my favorites, for sure.

"Demolishing stars as we pass"
"'Luminous' lovers"
"Devouring the night"

Yeah. By far, my favorite piece. Gentle words. Gentle emotions. Wonderful.

[Neal S]

Cool! I'm glad you liked it.

[Shy Joe]

"Devouring the night" That's what lovers do. Something about the stillness of the night, empties the world. Then it's just two pebbles on the beach under the moon. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Neal S]

Thanks for stopping in!!