Curse

The rain comes down in waves, i hear the splashing of my footsteps so well

then there is one extra. i look behind me, no one is there

i hear the extra footstep every where i go

louder

louder

louder

louder

 

please forgive me, the world is just so very cruel. i can feel your eyes on me

every where i go, you follow, getting closer and closer

i can feel you watching me when i sleep at night

standing over my pillow, with those eyes

IM SORRY

IM SORRY

IM SORRY

IM SORRY

 

I lived my life in fear, knowing the day came closer and closer

its finally hear, the footsteps are unbearably loud

i cant hide any longer, today will be my last

goodbye

goodbye

goodbye

goodbye

Reviews

[~M&A~]

You can feel the words echo around as if they were thoughts that haunt you. Loved it. Great write

[Larry Dyson]

nicely executed in form...and well thought out emotionaly expressive...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent work in my mind. Dark and poignant, like the angel of death is waiting for you, ready to strike in the next moment.

[Gitana Deneff]

very frightening. And i liked the changes in font size

[Daydreamer54]

I love how you formatyted this and what you did with the lettrs in bold. I thought this piece was very dramatic and sad and I loved it! great write!

[NeonWolves]

Very nice. The style you put it in gives it extra depth. Well done. Very good read.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A highy prized piece, well done, great read

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Wonderfully written, interesting style. Great write!