breath

if i just keep breathing i know i will be alright

its just hard to see without a light

i have to fight this fight

so i wont lose sight

 

just breathe

 

i need help i know

but i dont wanna let it show

or to let any of the others go

i have to have you it needs to be so

 

 

 

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

boy, what a breath of fresh air...it's been a while since I read such an airy poem with insight and clarity...
excellent write, Mika
allen

[~M&A~]

Short, Simple, and to the point. It's perfect. ^^

[Niki Wilson]

I like this... You describe everything so.... wonderfully..?

[sugar]

i love your writing! this was really good