Awakening.

Glowing light of the Moon that Eve

October brought a pair to weave

Over simple passions & wine

Distant bodies, two souls entwine

Notwithstanding Circumstances

In their trysts they found solaces 

Growing steady, unwavering 

Heed the calls for awakening

The flames thru days have burned & turned

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned

As that bonfire must be contained

Resting cinders in ashes tamed

And Wind, only time will endow 

Hope of a wildfire, drift off now 

Author's Note

enjoy..

Reviews

[M. L. F.]

The flames thru days have burned & turned

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned
As that bonfire must be contained
Resting cinders in ashes tamed

Favorite stanzas above. They are really pretty. There is a lot of passion in this piece and that is nice.
Thanks for sharing it..
..Misty

[Desert Rose]

how sweet of you to review!!
working on a few more, hopefully done with one this week!
read morehow sweet of you to review!!
working on a few more, hopefully done with one this week!
Thanks!

[Kirsty Woodward]

This time of year is my favourite time. You gave this something different, its not like a lot of the cliche love poems I sometimes read. Thanks for the request Neo. Lovely read to wake up to.

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Kirsty!! i'm thrilled that you liked it this much!!
took my time while writing this one! i cherish it a lot! :)

[Unknown Poet]

Very touching I liked it very much.......

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Uday!! :)

[Unknown Poet]

You are most welcome my friend

[wordman]

wow! a touching love poem,loved the music as well..

[Desert Rose]

i'm starting this thing whereby i include the music i listen to while writing &/or the one that impacted me the most while writing! thanks for the review wordman!! :)

[Emily]

Love that first line!!
Keep it up!!

[Desert Rose]

Thank again Emily! :)