earth memory

creative writing thing

it wold have to be water i guess

 the feeling of glideing trought the icy liquid

completly submurged in another world

the preassure against my lungs

as i battle to stay just one more second underwater

then when my body can truely take no more

the break to the surface

the burning in my lungs

replaced with a sweet relif

and a newly rediscoverd desire

to again find myself lost in the depths

of the highly clorinated liquid

yes now that i think about it

it would  most defenetly have to be

water

Reviews

[melissa]

Amazing poem