Danceing Trough Hoops

idk if i like it..?

With you it’s always a song and dance

Complicated

Never easy

Always jumping through hoops

And not just hoops

Flaming hoops

Suspended 50 feet up

The size of a basket ball

But I go through them

Inch by inch

But I arrive on the other side

Burned, bruised and broken

But I’m there

Meeting your impossible standards

With you it’s always a song and dance

So it’s a good thing

That I’m a performer

Reviews

[melissa]

Amazing poem

[cfix]

This is kinda sad dontcha think? Which is good. I like writes like this. I love your last line kind of sums up the whole write. Nicely done!