love poems

i was better
at writeing love poems
before i fell in love

much better
back then it was a fairy tale
a "what if moment"

now its stumbeling
for the right words to describe
something that cant be described

its writeing
and eraseing a million different words
beacuse its "just not right"

and recently ive found
i cant write love poems
because i fell in love

being experianced
hasnt helped a bit
just made it more difficult to describe

beacuse love isnt words
its feelings
and feelings arnt words

so i think my love poems
were better off
without love
 afterall

Reviews

[melissa]

You are an amazing writer I hope to see these poems in stores one day

[Jake Donald Stephens]

Some very interesting points here! Makes you think, hmmmm.....

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