Hey B***h

Hey B***h,

What’s your deal.

Do you thrive

Off the pain of others

Off of deception

Of making people fools,

What’s your problem

Do you get a rush

Out of seeing people cry

A high,

From seeing them broken

From lying to their faces?

 What the f**k

Is wrong with you

Do you think its fun

Stringing people along

Making them think you care

Then walking out

Is there something wrong

In your head

Or are you just

A B***h

Reviews

[melissa]

I agree with everything Emily said this poem is so awsome and the words are very true

[emily]

Soo true. Who hasn't felt like this? I personally kind of wish I could staple it to the foreheads of some people I know... hahah. But seriously, this is a good read. I don't usually review poetry, because i have no idea how to critique it, but the title made me jump in. Whether it was just a venting of emotion or a real, planned out peice, I think it's awesome. Nice work!

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