Tempter's fire

Sweet tempter of my heart's treasures

You pull softly at my heart strings

Drawing me nearer and nearer to you.

Ever so close that you can hear the trembling in my breath

Your tranquil voice dances softly off your lips

And i wait for your touch, your sensual embrace,

your heavenly kiss.

My body longs for your passionate fire, the flames that

burn deep

Penetrating all of my existence.

 

Reviews

[Brandon]

wow...brilliantly written...your use of words and metaphors really draw the reader in and captures the true essence of the poem's source