Spark of Doubt

There was a time

A time so precious

There were moments 

Moments so precious

There was good and bad

All sort out with reasoning

There was love and hate

All sort out with a little bit of talk

But there was a spark

A spark that ignited

Ended up burning you and me within it

The spark of doubt … between us

Reviews

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Doubt is so powerful. So much more powerful than hope, sad to say. Doubt exists every where. I really liked your title. It only takes a spark of doubt to create a fire that will destroy what was once built between two people. Wonderfully penned. Tyfs

[Mk.t.g]

True, once the feelings of misunderstanding develop in a relationship, there is no going back. Doubts are the only thing that can actually build cracks around your relationship, and without a warning, they will break down everything, that was once there.

Thank you for reading, Cyprian!

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, when doubts set in they can niggle away and fester. Can spell the end of relationships if not tackled head on. Nicely composed.

Chris

[Mk.t.g]

Thanks, Cris for your wonderful words and your time!

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)