Various Remnants of Heartbreak - poem 1

I get sad a lot and I cry out poems

This feeling of black blood 

Is pumping in my heart 

I don't know what else could 

Tear me more apart 

A heartbroken soul Is denied a single thing 

Blood as black as coal 

Keeps me from breathing

Author's Note

Have at it

Reviews

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This writing came out when a heart is shattered badly I feel....blood as black as coal, it's good to cry through poems...papers will absorb all your tears without a single complain...tis a sad yet good read of expressions....thanks for sharing :)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Thank you for your review, this is a very old poem. I've moved to Wattpad, feel free to follow me there. Wattpad.com/neverwonit

[Vishuddha]

Haunting, heavy, dark. Oh yes, and, black. Well written!

[Eryn ♪]

I like how you continue with the black blood throughout the poem.
Short and sweet.