Nymphomania

Inside the mind of...

I've got to have it
what would I be without?
hands red, a bandit
just too quiet, I can't shout

 

I feel you but it's nothing to me
I feel you but it's everything to me
your hands all over and you inside
I feel you but it's anything to me

 

I want to stop and I've tried
white knuckles and grit teeth
their dodgy looks tear me up inside
I just want in between

 

You come and go and leave me empty
tears stream on down
look how you've all left me
looser, dejected and with a frown

 

I feel you but it's nothing to me
I feel you but it's everything to me
your hands all over and you inside
I feel you but it's anything to me 
 

Author's Note

Let me just say I am not a nymphomaniac!! This is just from my friend's perspective, who, I must say, is one.

Reviews

[Malik Amandla]

You did a great job of depicting someone elses emotions. It's hard enough to express ones self, it's especially challenging when you express for a friend. I think this poem accurately describes the feelings and troubles of a nympho. I could visualize the who scene in this poem despite having never met your friend.

[MarkGMelvin]

mhm

[Panthera Tigris]

You definitely captured the "essence of thy nympho" i actually felt like your are the person feeling this writing this at the moment. Very deep; complete emotion.

[Last Lying Look]

I agree with Angelic Darkness.
Used and abused sounds about right. The poem was excellent. I really liked it. the picture was also very pretty. Good work! :D

[Angelic Darkness]

This poem to me sounds like someone that is used and abused, yet keeps going
back for more because they are never truly satisfied. Not all in a sexual way, but
with who they are...looking for something that can't be found. AD

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Well, I WILL say....I think the repetition of the "I feel you but...." is TREMENDOUS. Inside of those lines you really grasp the victory and defeat at the same time.

Dope piece (non-Nympho).