Heart, Strength, You and I

This poem is based off of the book A Thousand Splendid Suns by Khaled Hosseini

The way he smells, when he looks at me

My heart would skip a beat

His face, his hair

The strength of how I felt would over power the heat

Every prayer, every day was him

It has always been him

The nights when the lights were dim

My heart falls as well

Missing his touch

But even though my heart has fell

I will never give up the hope

He promise I would feel his love

That he would be back

And I trust him as I look above

The way he smells, when he looks at me

My heart would skip a beat

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. The emotion was written with great skill. I like the flow of words. I could feel the emotion and desire of love and need. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote