I miss you

I miss someone. I hope they miss me too.

I miss you so much.

where did you go?

Are you coming back?

I want you back.

We haven't talked in a while.

Used to talk everyday.

It made me smile when you were on.

It always made me happy to know you where there.

Are you out there?

Are you even listening?

Can you hear my cries for you?

Don't know I miss you?

Days and nights go by with no response.

I fear I may have done something to make you run away.

Have I done something wrong?

Did I say something to offend?

I miss you.

I want you back.

I hope you are still my friend.

I hope you miss me too.

Please come back to me.

I need you.

I am lost without you.

I miss you.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

This is straight out of my diary.. ;) Isn't is amazing how someone you love can just fill you up so much and when they leave you feel like a limp noodle..xo Wonderfully penned..xo

[trainwreck]

This is great. I love the repeated lines. It's so hurt, and also so sweet. Great job Amanda!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh wow, Amanda. This is deep, sad, and beautiful all at once. I gathered that this person that you miss is a member of WritersCafe. Am I right? If you were their friend, then it wasn't your fault that they either closed their account or hasn't been on in awhile. It could be for personal reasons. I do know how it feels to have someone that you care about so much and you talk to them all of the time, and then out of nowhere they're gone from your reach. Things happen and we have to move on and find someone else that will bring the light back into our eyes. That's the cycle of friends in life. I am sure a lot of people has experienced. However, I'm sure that this person misses you as much as you miss them. Friends are forever! Your emotions are perfectly poured out and I can basically you hear you screaming out for the person to come back! Wonderful write.

Ashley Rivers-Dream BIG and you'll win BIG ;)

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! Very sad! And I know exactly how you feel! To have someone you care about with you everyday and before you even realize it, they're gone. It's the worst feeling in the world and I'm sorry you have to go through it as well!

[Felicity's Eve]

A wonderful, emotional write... :(

[Phillitup]

Aw...this is so sad! Of course, the fact that a reader can feel the sadness you are emitting means that you have written this really well. Nicely penned and best regards, Dell

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww hug. A very beautiful and sweet poem with a lot of longing and emotion.