Hearts connected (Tanka #3)

Tanka Number 3. What do you think?

                    

My loving Valentine

You have stolen my inner soul  

The blood of my beating heart 

Lay your puzzle piece lips near 

You are the one I hold so dear 

Reviews

[Kris]

A truly lovely write about love - you deliver the message with such simplicity and ease, it's hard not to fall in love with the poem itself! Well done.

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much!