My Paradise (Tanka #12)

Tanka #12 inspired by a contest. Hope you enjoy!

                                                                                     

You and me together 

Watching the sun light set in the west

Sipping drinks on the beach

Share a kiss in the bright moonlight

Paradise,sweet paradise 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This would be paradise. A warm day, near the beach and good company. A very good night. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

This would be paradise Amanda. You put so much into so few words. I love it.

[MandaBear]

Thanks so much

[ron]

You are most welcome Amanda.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Yes, it does sound like paradise. I think you really did a good job -Nice layout too.
Good luck!