You are

Just you are....Take it as you will (inspired by a line from Taylor swifts song blank space song ("Cause darling I'm a nightmare dressed like a daydream")

   

We had it all 

Just the two of us 

You were my nightmare 

Pretending to be my daydream

Reviews

[devon]

You've managed to write a beautiful, thoughtful, intricate poem in just four lines, one stanza, and very few words. Job well done!

The lovely contrast between 'nightmare' and 'daydream' serves this little work of literature well! (Taylor Swift is an absolute BABE, is she not? I love her!)

[MandaBear]

Thanks =) I was inspired by her song to write this. I also tried to make it different so I wasn't just taking it from her.

[Lea Walker]

The last little bit always throws me, I expect a happy ending but when that doesn't happen I sit there like "whoa what just happened." This is what makes it beautiful.

[Fill In The Blanks]

"You were my nightmare
Pretending to be my daydream" sounds like a lyric from Taylor swifts song

[MandaBear]

It was inspired by that song

[Jamestown]

Wow, very powerful! Thanks for sharing

[MandaBear]

Thanks reviewing =) I appreciate it