Soldier (Tanka #22)

Just something I came up with while talking to a friend

        

My sweet dearest Soldier 

I had a big hole in my heart

A spot only you fill 

You've left an imprint on my heart 

You might say that I love you 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Aha! the lines "i had a big hole in my heart/a spot only you fill"....im speechless and you inspired me to write something.... clappings!!!! clappings!!!!.... 100

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Just 5 lines to express someone, how much you like....
Absolute stunner!

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much! This was just something off the top of my head. i'm glad you liked it =)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I loved it :) You're most welcome my friend!

[Ada]

Simple, powerful, and sweet.
Line four left the biggest impact to me.

[MandaBear]

I am glad that you liked it =)

[ron]

Very sweet. I love this one

[MandaBear]

Thanks! I am glad you liked it. It just was something I thought of on the top of my head

[ron]

It was really good