#Vampire Love (Tanka #23)

Inspired by my friends words so I made a poem out of them/ I hope you enjoy

    

Upon moon lights glow 

The taste of your passion on my lips 

Hands bring us closer 

Vampire bites and body licks 

My love for you can't help but grow 

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Awesome poem Amanda. It's very sexy and lusty.

[The Protagonist]

I like this piece! Very lusty and passionate :)

[MandaBear]

Thank you =) I am glad my friend allowed me to use his words for this poem =)

[The Protagonist]

Aw it's great you have a friend that you can work in conjunction with, y'know, bounce ideas off one another and such, it's brilliant.

[ron]

This is very sexy.........

[MandaBear]

Thank you. The friends words inspired me to write this =P

[ron]

Your friend is very lucky

[MandaBear]

Yes he is. His words moved me. I thank him so much for letting me use his beautiful words for my poem

[ron]

Well I'm sure he feels very moved that you used his words.

[MandaBear]

I hope so =)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Cool the words are very catchy but the pics are too lusty like vampires....lol
Great wrote!

[MandaBear]

Thanks =) I guess vampires aren't that lusty lol

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes provided they are not like Edward of twilight....lol

[MandaBear]

Well I don't like Twilight I never could get into it lol I tried. Vampires don't sparkle lol

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

hmm.................

[MandaBear]

Do you like Twilight??

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You see my profile pic? lol

[MandaBear]

Lol I saw it but for some reason I thought it was something else lol

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Its a picture from Twilight that's Edward & Bella....I like twilight :)

[MandaBear]

I am more of a Sherlock Fan

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's really nice!

[Justin]

that was really good :) u were able to make a creature like a vampire and make them into a great story :)

[MandaBear]

Thank you very much I am glad you liked it =)

[Justin]

your welcome :) cant wait to read your next poem :)