Snowflake (Tanka # 34)

They are co beautiful

White, cold but unique 

Different but just as great 

Flake in its own right 

Falling down to become snow 

It's a beautiful snowflake

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The beauty of snowflake is more personified in your lines.
Its Amazing!

[Philip Muls]

Beautiful and simple truth.

Can you check out my story Singularity on snowflakes and people.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing description of the falling of the snow. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Thank you for the kind review =)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Tristan Sinclair]

I don't know what just happened, but I'm pretty sure it became a beautiful snowflake.

I want as many of these as you can convince yourself to produce.

Go.

[MandaBear]

Thank you for liking my little writing =) I had fun writing it.

[Tristan Sinclair]

I want you to make one about an energy drink.

Like, at the end, I want it to become an energy drink. I want a series on every mundane object you can think of. And some not so mundane ones.

[MandaBear]

Why?? just curious....

[Tristan Sinclair]

Cuzz I wanna know what you would dooooo.

[MandaBear]

well I will have to think about it

[Lox]

Oooh a tanka! This piece is great in its own right, I see you've entered this in my contest. But I fail to see how this makes snow a positive element. You said it was unique which points up with the positivism. Nicely done overall.