You Had Me At Hello (Tanka #35)

I couldn't get this song out of my head and I saw a contest my inspiration could be used for. I hope you like it.

A love was growing 

First friends then became much more 

From there the seed was sewn

Like manifested to love 

Because you had me at hello 

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I am able to relate to this one with the feelings that im going through now....I hope that the person to whom you have directed this understands this soon.....Lovely work mate....Full ratings.....

[MandaBear]

Thank you for the review it made my day! I hope the person does too. He really took my heart..

[Inject Positivity]

Even your comment made my day....He will understand and will feel lucky.....

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Lovely! That's really true..... The picture makes it more beautiful :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those sweet hellos. Make us dream and want more. Beautiful artwork and words dear Poet. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Thank you! I wish the person it was meant for knew it was meant for him. I am glad you liked my poem =)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did dear Poet and you are welcome.

[Kass]

I really that this peace was short and agree, could be expressed more. But as a writer I also agree with, "You want to let your readers figure out the rest of the story." I really enjoyed this! Thank you and good luck!

[MandaBear]

Well thank you for liking it. =) Maybe in the future I will make it longer we will see but I happy for the suggestion =)

[littlewonders]

that's a story I think needs to be expressed more, great job

[MandaBear]

Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed my little writing =)