Toxic Love (Tanka #52)

I had this stuck in my head all day..

I smell your sweet scent 

Your venom running through my veins 

You are turning me bad 

Filling my body with your toxin

Your poison is like heaven  

Reviews

[Bra.Kofi]

the feeling you get when you're falling for someone you know isn't good for you.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

The 19th century femme fatale concept, only reversed *_________*
Loved the poem, that was an interesting description !

[Shabeeh Haider]

No toxin more potent than love. Beautifully written

[MandaBear]

thank you so much I am glad you liked it

[aziza]

Just wow.....last line is the most toxic one 👍

[MandaBear]

I am so glad you liked it =)

[Inject Positivity]

Love can be toxic when it becomes painful and heartbreaking... Short work with a concept of how the most relationships at this moment go... You know how to put thoughts into papers... Clever clever...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[MandaBear]

Thank you so much!

[Nia Lisa]

Love this! The poem totally works with the picture too!

[MandaBear]

Thank you I am so glad you liked it =)

[Cobblestone Traveler]

I enjoyed this. Very dark yet sultry. You captured the alluring attraction poisonous love can sometimes have. Nice job.

[MandaBear]

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it. Yeah sometimes love can have a dark side to it