Man

not finished.....yet!

You want perfection....I give you love...You want power...I give you my ears
I want love...You give me your heart...I want someone...You became my man

To think to have you...My man is one of a kind....Your hair,your eyes....You can yourself be called my man

Perfection,love, power....How do we want thee...Oh how i want you and me

My man my man....Please dont take to long....I wait, I wait....My man my man....Now and forever and ever amen

Reviews

[Jessica Samuelsen]

Your such a sweetie and a romantic..... Don't loose that !!! Ever

[sandra faulkner]

Perfection is in the eye of the beholder.

[Rebel Angel]

this is lovely it shows how love makes you believe in this perfect man however as you wait, hes not. Hes not a truly perfect man until he is yours then he is your perfect man. I hope he becomes this for you i really do.

[SimonitroX]

Very interesting poem. Will this Man respond to your request or will he be another disappointment?

The perfection of man is being imperfect thus makes him unpredictable yet loved... somehow!

Fun Poem. :)

[lJ french]

wow this is deep :) i like it :)