Kryptonite

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Superman's one weakness.

 

Atom by atom being broken down.

 

The body starting to shut down.

 

Heart starts pumping when you come along.

 

You are my Kryptonite.

 

 

Your my only weakness.

 

knees shaking and raddling.

 

Exploding with vast emotions.

 

You are my Kryptonite.

 

 

 

Do you think of me as your weakness?

 

Are you as weak kneed as me?

 

Do your Emotions get the best of you?

 

Am I your Kryptonite?

 

 

Explosions in your heart.

 

Showing a new layer

 

Unfolding a brand new love.

 

Am I you Kryptonite?

 

 

 

 

 

 

You are my Kryptonite. You make me feel like no other. Some day i will meet you and one day i will get the chance to be weak kneed, blush softly and tell you....

 

.....Your my Kryptonite....

Author's Note

Tell me what you think so far!

Reviews

[Jessica Samuelsen]

I love it... Can I be your Kryptonite?

[Kiri Nells]

This had a nice flow, and it was pretty easy to read. I spotted a few typos. One at the end, "Your my Kryptonite" should read, "You're my Kryptonite" and the 17th line says, "Am I you Kryptonite" and should say, "Am I your Kryptonite". Other than that and a few misplaced capitals, its great! I can tell you have a poetic heart. I like the feeling it gives. Don't take my critical review so seriously, because it's really a great read. It just needs some cleaning up. Thanks for writing!

[trainwreck]

This was awesome. I liked it quite a bit. This had an excellent flow and a lovely concept.

[Hatchling]

good :)

[qaralynn]

sweet poem!!

[Janice Ann]

To me this is the "Love Letter" to your future love. And I agree with Simon review, your weakness can be your strength. I say well done. Wonderfully written!

[SimonitroX]

However you look at it, your weakness could also be your strength.

For superman's case, it's whatever creates you it destroys you. Interesting poem.