Sonnet of Love

I wrote this about someone I like a lot. This is my first attempt at writing a sonnet. I used Shakespeare's ABAB CDCD EFEF GG format. Love or Hate let me know

 Although I have only known you for a week

 Every message you send makes me smile

Your love is what my heart came to seek.

 My love for you will last a great while.

 My lips wish to kiss yours every night.

 I want my body against yours.

 Laying next to you would be a wonderful sight.

 For your looks are what I adore.

 Our souls have become one

 Our bodies now belong to each other

 With you I feel like like i am loved a ton.

For you are my only lover

Baby promise you will always be mine

 I will be ours for all of time

Reviews

[Angelic Surrender]

This is really sweet. Great work. It's nice to have a special someone no matter how long you've known them.