Star

.. I

fly with you 

my wind of songs

and kiss the night..

sad darkness light..

the loneliness fate

flys.. shining far

to die a star

a careless 

star...

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A love or love lost poem as so many are. As for dying a careless star, I'd have to agree with Jack on this one, "I would rather be ashes than dust! I would rather that my spark should burn out in a brilliant blaze than it should be stifled by dry-rot. I would rather be a superb meteor, every atom of me in magnificent glow, than a sleepy and permanent planet. The proper function of man is to live, not to exist. I shall not waste my days in trying to prolong them. I shall use my time." Jack London

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your comment!🤝

[Ayesha Faiz]

I’m not even lying, there’s something special about your words. It gives this strangely beautiful feeling that sends chills. I swear I’m not exaggerating. Maybe it’s just me, but… wow. I don’t even have words. I don’t think most people would find such short poetry this deep, but I do for some reason even though it's the second poem
I read of yours and yet it gave me chills in the best way. I don't even need to appreciate your writing. I think my words alone would be enough for you to acknowledge your own potential and skills. Your poem, star.. just the word alone... holds meanings far deeper than the human mind could imagine it we look at it in a philosophical way.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us!

[Nick Fatum]

I'm really surprised.. You probably have it too.. this gift.. Thank you very much..
https://vimeo.com/manage/videos/1030451996
https://vimeo.com/manage/videos/1087373311

[emmajoygreen]

That could be the saddest yet most beautiful example of isolation, 'a careless star..' indeed, in deed.

[Nick Fatum]

Really.. thank you

[Nick Fatum]

Have a nice day!🤝

[emmajoygreen]

Trying to do just that but have a birthday event here, late Sunday afternoon in the garden - so a little busy and is very hot! Maybe I'll wish up that star.

[Nick Fatum]

Wonderful, I wish you good luck in everything!

[emmajoygreen]

Thank you. :)

[Nick Fatum]

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[Nick Fatum]

https://www.artmajeur.com/nick-fatum/en/news/1298824/interview

[emmajoygreen]

now there and joined

[Nick Fatum]

....🤝....

[emmajoygreen]

Reality in the every day is knowing how to live it.

[emmajoygreen]

Each star has a name and wandering place just as a human being has: the difference between the two is that the star is ever beautiful, the human at worst - jealous, at best - envious.

[Nick Fatum]

The text's become.. an occasion for world-reflecting thinking.. thank you for share 🤝

[Lisasview]

I feel your last lines carry the meaning of your entire poem... Metaphors are my most favourite...
Lisasvie

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you so much for such a assessment!🤝

[Lisasview]

You are most welcome!
Lisa

[Nick Fatum]

Nice to meet you, Lisa 🤝

[redd Brick Keshner]

To me the closing lines: "to die a star / a careless star…" carry a melancholic weight—that of resignation wrapped in cosmic wonder. It is as if the Universe itself watches over us, indifferent yet radiant. Thank you for sharing this piece; it abides, like a star flickering on the edge of memory. 🕊️
Freds

[Nick Fatum]

You're welcome! Really thank you for your comment 🤝

[redd Brick Keshner]

Most welcome and looking forward to hear your thoughts on mine as well 🙏🏻🕊️

[Nick Fatum]

Of course, with pleasure🤝

[redd Brick Keshner]

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[Jessica F.]

The sad reflection, fateful.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your assessment!

[Jessica F.]

Thank you!

[Sam Daniel]

"Brevity is the sister of talent", that's cool, congratulations!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your assessment, Sam!

[Chris]

The "visual" brought memories of my own...
the words resonate within my existence.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your assessment.🤝

[Chris]

Welcome to Writer's Cafe.

[Nick Fatum]

Which is wonderful), Thank you.

[James Reed]

It's like the lyrics to a ballad song, wonderful poetry!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the comment, James!

[Tina Fly]

Wow.. very precise, concise and imaginative formulations
self-reflection of the tragic worldview of a genuine man of art, as a strange and alienated talent who feels the world around him much deeper, sharper and more painful than the average person, who usually "plays" art as a means of self-affirmation, psychotherapy and banal entertainment..
and the image of a comet flying in the giant darkness.. emphasizes the main message of the verse. Thank you for posting!

[Nick Fatum]

No words, Tina.. thank you!

[Tina Fly]

Thank You, Nick.