Echo

.. the magical haze of roadside flowers

spreads all its petals towards to the warmth..

the stream in the eyes of the beasts was reflected 

of gentle silver drops, light affectionate hands...

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Looked at the image, thought a firefly genus! Tis such a magical photo; a lone but beautiful moment, meant to create calm and a long, long pause. As a garden designer, I encourage wild areas in gardens, not straight Manmade lines. We were allotted a wild world, that's how it should be, untouched (unless dangerous). The scene you show is an inspiration!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the comment.

[Nick Fatum]

Nice to meet you 🤝

[emmajoygreen]

Oh, I didn't think anyone was online.. seems like an isolation station. Your words are food for the mind and heart. The image creates thought.

[Nick Fatum]

Really..thank you!🤝

[emmajoygreen]

Have you ever stood, sat, lain on back and watched ever-changing clouds? That is bliss as is.. the dance of leaves and blossoms - nature's gifts that return every year!!! Your image is one of those.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for such a wonderful imaginative observation!

[emmajoygreen]

I try - as much as possible!

[Nick Fatum]

....🤝🤝....

[emmajoygreen]

Enjoy each blink of the day..

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for all your comments🤝

[Belle]

Your imagery is enchanting, painting a world where nature feels alive and tender. I love how even the smallest details—the flowers, the stream, the beasts’ eyes, carry a sense of intimacy and gentle affection. Reading this feels like stepping into a soft, magical moment suspended in time.

[Nick Fatum]

Really.. thank you for the appreciation.🤝

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Love it. Thanks for sharing

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the appreciation.

[Ayesha Faiz]

This poem paints such a calm and magical picture. I love how the roadside flowers reaching for warmth feel almost alive, and the way the beasts’ eyes reflect gentle silver drops is really touching. Kind of reminds me of the poem Daffodils by William Wordsworth...
Your poem has a peaceful, emotional tone that stays with you... soft, yet full of quiet meaning.
Your words were a quiet gift. Thanks for sharing this poem.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you Ayesha🤝

[Betty Hermelee]

The photo is blurred just like the dreamy words you write...a special moment in time for you...thoughts of warmth that you create in this piece...I can picture in my mind certain notions of being in a quiet space, taking in all that mother nature provides.. and "light and affectionate hands" brings other thoughts to mind. lovely
Warmly, B

[Nick Fatum]

Really thank you, good luck with everything!🤝

[Betty Hermelee]

You are very welcome!
Warmly, B

[Phantom Heart]

This poem makes me feel nostalgic. I usually am not at a loss for words, but here I am. All I can say is this poem is beautiful in all of the right places.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the appreciation!🤝

[Phantom Heart]

You are welcome. :)

[Fia Naturie]

This gives me subtle beauty and the beast vibes. beautiful

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the comment🤝

[Tina Fly]

It reminds me a musical phrase.. like the lyrics of a dream song... beautifully.

[Nick Fatum]

Nice.. thank you!

[Nick Fatum]

Have a great day!

[Tina Fly]

Same to you).

[Nick Fatum]

.....🤝....

[James Reed]

A wonderful, subtle poetic text combined with an image.. Just superb! Thanks for your posting, Nick.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you James! 🤝

[James Reed]

You're welcome.

[Nick Fatum]

Have a nice day 🤝