Echo

.. the magical haze of roadside flowers

spreads all its petals towards to the warmth..

the stream in the eyes of the beasts was reflected 

of gentle silver drops, light affectionate hands...

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Looked at the image, thought a firefly genus! Tis such a magical photo; a lone but beautiful moment, meant to create calm and a long, long pause. As a garden designer, I encourage wild areas in gardens, not straight Manmade lines. We were allotted a wild world, that's how it should be, untouched (unless dangerous). The scene you show is an inspiration!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the comment.

[Nick Fatum]

Nice to meet you 🤝

[emmajoygreen]

Oh, I didn't think anyone was online.. seems like an isolation station. Your words are food for the mind and heart. The image creates thought.

[Nick Fatum]

Really..thank you!🤝

[emmajoygreen]

Have you ever stood, sat, lain on back and watched ever-changing clouds? That is bliss as is.. the dance of leaves and blossoms - nature's gifts that return every year!!! Your image is one of those.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for such a wonderful imaginative observation!

[emmajoygreen]

I try - as much as possible!

[Nick Fatum]

....🤝🤝....

[emmajoygreen]

Enjoy each blink of the day..

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for all your comments🤝

[Buddhistboy73]

The magic of nature,,,,

#an interesting poem my WC friend..:)

I liked the second line....spreads towards the warmth.....

Thanks for sharing,

Feel free to stop by and review one of my poems ...

BB73

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for the comment, of course, with pleasure

[Lisasview]

I often say The Good... the Bad and the Ugly
I enjoyed this poems because there are more meaning behind and beyond the words.
Lisasview

[Nick Fatum]

Really thank you Lisa!

[redd Brick Keshner]

This poem carries a soft, dreamlike quality, where nature is both vivid and elusive, unfolding in fragments of light and motion. The use of ellipses gives the lines a fluid, almost drifting rhythm, much like thoughts that hover in the air before settling, or like a pause that allows the reader to breathe within the moment. A true pleasure. 🕊️

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you so much for your appreciation!🤝

[redd Brick Keshner]

Most welcome Nick🙏🏻🕊️

[Jessica F.]

Such an unusual structure of the amazing text, it's my favorite poem.

[Nick Fatum]

Really thank you, Jessica!

[Chris]

Impressions need not be melancholy...
to touch and resonate. To me this brought a smile.

[Nick Fatum]

As many people as there are opinions. Thank you.

[Chris]

Chuckling here, we each have our perceptions...
some match, others - not so much.

[Nick Fatum]

Wealth in diversity, poverty in sameness)

[Chris]

How do we grow and exist when there is nothing to attract our attentions?

[Nick Fatum]

That's right.. I agree.

[Sam Daniel]

The poetic text is so imaginative and associative! The feeling of beauty and uniqueness of the natural world around us is really amazing conveyed, once again my sincere respect to the author, thank you for posting!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your appreciation!

[Sam Daniel]

btw, I read ur poetry on wattpad, it's cool.

[Nick Fatum]

Really thank you!

[Tina Fly]

A strange and sad feeling of a beautiful and fragile world passing through you like sand through your fingers and disappearing into time irrevocably, where ordinary words are missing and only wonderful mystical associations combined with the image of a child sleeping in endless deep space.. There're no words, Nick! Thank you!

[Nick Fatum]

I didn't expect.. Thank you,Tina!

[Jessica F.]

A beautiful figurative and associative poem and a really wonderful image at the bottom, judging by the link, is also yours as an artist of digital art - such a diverse and unique work, congratulations!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for such an appreciation of creativity, Jessica!

[Nick Fatum]

Really thank you for it!🤝

[Ms claws]

You're good.
The silver always inspires the mind.
A very mysterious yet attractive write!
Thanks for posting!