Dead inside

.. dead  inside of suicide

destiny's from outside

longing eyes like cold silver

flame stars in a timeless river...

https://www.artmajeur.com/nick-fatum/en/artworks/18546193/the-trap

Reviews

[Sam Daniel]

Hi! In addition to the wonderful minimalistically figurative text about the realization of the hopeless fatality of the time of being flowing like a river, I really liked the associative coincidence with the image below, sad and fatalistic - respect to the author!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your comment and appreciation!

[Sam Daniel]

You're welcome, I just like it.

[Nick Fatum]

Good luck in everything. 🤝

[Sam Daniel]

You too, I really like it.

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your appreciation!

[Ms claws]

Hi, I really can't make heads nor tails out of this one.
However, the best poets are insane, I think.
Don't take that the wrong way. lol.
It kind of reminds me of Revelations.
The great star Wormwood falls into the waters turning them bitter.
Yeah! I see it! Awesome write!

[Nick Fatum]

Thank you for your appreciation!🤝