In My Nightmare

I can see them

watching and waiting

getting ready to pounce

I run but I’m not fast enough

can’t fight the monsters anymore

they overpower me and I’m helpless

I scream but no one hears me

it’s like a circle of pain

over and over and over again

they strip me of my pride

when they’re done with me

all that’s left is a broken puppet

a shell of a person

nothing but debris

Reviews

[Stevo The POE-t]

Once again girl a very well written poem... And once again my kind of poem... I love the dark side of poetry... Where we as writers can unleash the horror, the demons of hell... We as humans all possess monsters/demons... They hide in our closet at night just so people can't see how screwed up we really are... This is another one I really wish I would have written... I really love the line "All that's left is a broken puppet."

This is the type of poem that will send shivers right down your spine... But for so many of us this poem is true going back to what I said above... The demons that possess us become to strong to fight off after so long and you just let them become a part of you... And in the end I really do believe nothing is left of you but the shell of what you used to be... Can't wait to read more of your work...

[Costa Siwale]

when they’re done with me

all that’s left is a broken puppet

a shell of a person

nothing but debris

awesome poem! well written

[Nicole Williams]

thank you so much! :)

[Costa Siwale]

with poems like this , you are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

"I scream but no one hears me



it’s like a circle of pain



over and over and over again"

When you are stripped of your pride you feel the ebb and tide...Bravo.............




they strip me of my pride

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is indeed felt nightmarish, you conveyed a frantic feel from start to finish. Well done!

[Nicole Williams]

The perfect feel of fear, so well described here. Claustrophobic, awareness almost... stuck, and alone, a black hole of angst. Wonderful piece, I like your dark raw writings.

- Elisa

[Nicole Williams]

thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

I really do.... will check more of you within the time, :) you're very welcome! x

[Rose Diamond]

I found this poem quite beautiful. Dark, ominous, and scary, but beautiful none the less :)

[Nicole Williams]

Thank you so much :) ill be sure to check out your work as well

[Rose Diamond]

Thanks! I really appreciate that. :)

[Lucifer Jones]

An astute recitation... Realism, dark and gripping. Good job.

[Charlie]

I can see that this was written with a lot of meaning from deep inside. I feel everyone has dark and powerful nightmares. Great work.

[Nicole Williams]

thank you ^___^

[Will Neill]

Kora, I felt this was written from the heart, it reads dark and powerful, I hope you have good dreams too.
Will
P.s My Daughter's name is Kora as well-so I will be taking an interest in your work.

[Nicole Williams]

Thank you so much and I'm happy you liked it :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I wish I had more nightmares love the frills and scares :) good work and good flow :)