I love you.

Just before my fingers touch you
I hear a secret in the wind
Live and love and lost without you
So much to say, nowhere to begin

Life was pale and slow before you
Colorless shades of gray abound
Now vibrant streams of light surround you
Lost without you, now I’m found

A trick, a turn, a smile from you
Sends me swinging high and wide
Merry sounds of laughter greet you
 As I pull you to my side

My arms encircle, hold and keep you
Your hair is all about us
A kiss, a peck, a hug just for you
Angelic face I’ve come to trust

Your heart, your hand, everything about you
I could never leave, never wander nor roam
Yourself, your soul, everything about you
This is me and you’re my home.

Reviews

[Paladin4life]

Thank you for entering my contest. I really enjoyed the ending of this poem. I love that this couple is one that will last forever. That is wonderful and is exactly the theme I am looking for, Good work and God bless!

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow...!!lovely poem....!

"Your heart, your hand, everything about you
I could never leave, never wander nor roam
Yourself, your soul, everything about you
This is me and you're my home. "
great job...!

[Nautili]

lovely poem. I liked the idea of the wind whispering to you that you have found a true love for all times. love is like a wind, it blows gently into our hearts, and if it finds a home there, we can ride on the current through many difficult times in our lives.

[Michelle Long]

Absolutely beautiful poem!

"A trick, a turn, a smile from you
Sends me swinging high and wide
Merry sounds of laughter greet you
As I pull you to my side"

And a very lovely way to end it;
"This is me and you're my home."

Wonderful job!
=)