Struggle

What is struggle???

Is it the first attempt of a child

to inhale this world's air

or  is it the hopefulness of a woman

to seek her "own"self in the society..

or a man striving hard

to maintain his immortal prestige...

be it anything

more worthy the struggle is...more are the chances of getting through....

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

Wow. I liked how you put the demons in the process of a birth..Its desire to be born, its mother's identity crisis, its father's effort to maintain status..And the hope in the end..
Good job..
the "Or " scheme is good..
I am surprised at the use of "d" in place of "the". Is it deliberate colloquialism? Has the e language pervaded our mind? Just pulling your leg..Honestly, a great work !!

[the_stoic]

i feel that the write is still incomplete . there are a few apparent scenarios wherein struggle becomes imperative . nonetheless the three often encountered experiences are portrayed subtly . keep writing

[paul]

"getting through' ... beautiful

[paul]

interesting. different. inspired

[Khaaki]

beautifully done... struggle goes hand in hand with life... the struggles of this life stop only when we stop breathing...

[Art Sun]

nice work...this world is made to struggle...to fight for every breath, each step, and to seek the equality that we deserve...

[.]

. beautifully written ... indeed all struggles are divine ... and any struggle to express freedom or celebrate it is noble ... loved your poem ...

[Siddhartha]

Wonderful, wonderful write...Struggle maketh the man for only he who has experienced the darkness before dawn can fully appreciate the first rays of the Sun...And this spectacular poem embodies that...Great job...

[ttttt]

Love the concept here- and there is a definite rhythm. a couple of spelling errors (but those can be easily fixed)

[katee]

awesome poem..