so intimate

so intimate that i smile...your eyes twinkle

so intimate that i lament... your eyes cry

so intimate that your chin above my head shelters me all eternity

so intimate that your hands enwrapping my waist sheild me all eternity:-)

you seem to be a blue sky and me a green earth

embracing me and soaking up all my blues...

in this ethereal shower of love i raise my head and pray 

may our intimacy live all eternity ...!!!

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Real Intimacy........

[Khaaki]

So subtle and lovely... good one Nida... thanks for sharing

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like the repetition of intimacy here, it's amazing how monogamy and immortality are things we strive for. Very sweet.

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[Siddhartha]

sweet, tender and profound...this has a voice and speaks well, my friend...

[Forest Green]

Sweet as a sunrise...delightful, sincere, giving freely of hopes and wishes and the delicate simplicity of soft moments...

Very nice...

[Art Sun]

this is very grasping, to love with all the energy of eternity is to have that special someone who lives into the very life beyond...an enjoyable view of your thoughts...