torque

thoughts scatter like pennies tossed into a jar

dreams oscillate like spring-mass system..

hopes whirl like a never stopping pool.....

life held on the torque like a horse in a mill...

everything rotates .....

except my "inner" me fails!!!!

Reviews

[Lilly Negoi]

everything rotates indeed, but not everything with the same speed :)

[Khaaki]

Im an engineering student too n this is a thorough treat... i read it on fb... loved it... superb...

[Siddhartha]

Oh, this is super writing. Being an engineer myself I found this funny as well. The last line delivers a solid punch to the face.

[Forest Green]

Vitally written...truly interesting metaphors. You have expressed frustration well....it is a never-ending challenge.

Steele