fate

Eternities toss up the fates…

Some get well-off 

Some get shattered into shards…

Mine  too were swept away on the next glooming morning…

May be this is the reason I never believed you…..”heaven”!!!

Reviews

[WindSong]

Great poems don't have to be long. I can feel your heart and soul in each and every poetic word written! This is great!

WindSong

[Siddhartha]

Oh, it's like a card play out there. Not everyone gets a fair deal. Your poem is meaningful and layered.

[katee]

awesome poem...your words are direct n meaningful both:)

[Khaaki]

short and meaningful... good work nida

[N.J]

Nida in just four lines u said a lot of things... I m impressed by ur way to thought nd write.. Lovely 1.. Take care

[Forest Green]

Much like a teardrop of disappointment your poem reveals one crushed moment in time...

Nice...