Black Hole Project 13 Saga: Book One- Beginnings

A Book by Locke Redwyne (night sys)

A story we wrote off a whim last year. In dire need of editing and a whole remodel of the plot and pacing. By Peregrinator7, Jay, and myself.

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© 2018 Locke Redwyne (night sys)

Author's Note

We are still in the process of editing this, as we wrote it really quickly, and didn't really worry about how it sounded, just that our ideas were down on virtual paper

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Peregrinator7

....And we didn't worry about the horrible plot holes and really bad pacing that kinda just dropped on it like a nuke.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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7 Years Ago

yeah...
could you go through and post edits on your characters' povs? it's ok if you want me .. read more

7 Years Ago

at some point yeah

7 Years Ago

ok good thanks

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Wow, we haven't used this account in literal years! DID system of 19, idk if we'll be posting here but. I'm so glad to find this archive of our old writing. more..