Let the darkness consume me

I was bored what can I say?

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

i open up the door

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

i keep the lights shut

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

then i......

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

i walk to the mirror

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

the night reflecting the glass

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

and my reflection

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

and my last breath

 LET THE DARKNESS CONSUME ME

as i fall

Author's Note

forgive me for the bad grammar and I don't care if there not capitalized it's supposed to be that way!

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Sometimes boredom spawns pretty decent work. ^^ Love the repitition; it really makes an imprint onto my brain. lol! It's a neat lil storyline. :) Thanks for posting!

And yeah, I agree with the Mad Prophet: accept yourself (whether dark or not), and you will become stronger! :D I know that through experience... like everyone else. LOL!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Manhunt[er]]

Some pretty good work my dear!

[Lexy]

Actually, the capitalization was a very good touch. It wouldn't have been as good if it wasn't capitalized.
Very nice job on this, I must say. I really liked it.

[The Mad Prophet]

Well writen, most of my poetry expresses how good the darkness can be. Once you face it, you are stronger. Well expressed on your part. Nice poem, well done.