night person

i fond it in an old story that I was editing

 At the heart of night

watch the lone boy

waiting

in the pale moon’s light

eyes forever changing

ice to clouds

stars upon faded jeans

upon raven hair

half wild still slightly mad

bewildered by time

chained

to the night

as he walks he might hear

a sound shift into a

moon beam

and be gone

Author's Note

i hope you like it!

Reviews

[Aileen]

wow. vrry nice. i like it. th way u discribed it made me feel like i wuz thr watching him.
keap up th great work
ur friend
Aileen

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

That was amazing. :) Imagery was really great! And the basic picture you present to the reader is very mystic and maybe even a little eerie. ^^ Great job! Glad you found it.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood