Hard thinking

weird poem lol

 Pure                                                         Two halves equal a whole

prisoner of my own                                          the truth hidden in the birthmark

Lucifer's hands                                                  just another vampire

my bones are your bones                                dying to live

when a blind man cries                                dead little princess

the black sheep dies                                    no one wanted to forgive

for you I'd bleed myself dry                        and forget

for those vampires                                       young lovers

my poetry felt love                                        scared

erased in the magic mirror                     of me

hanging above                                          because I don't regret

from the bottom of                               when I don't talk to humans

my blank heart                                     I talk to the mirrors

demolition lover                                    I burn

able to love?                                         all the treats, bells

depression demons                            and knights

think up                                              The stove yearned to touch

mental suicide and notes                 so I burn, burn, burn

which flutter all around my eyes           burn identity 

bulimia                                                       dissolve

Is the model in the making                     my new face

sad and lonely                                           red eyes and hands

pollution                                                   are my demons

empty world of pain                             of inspiration

this is the story of a girl                            I'll never be

history of a guy                                           safe

alcohol free

pouring over the sides

Reviews

[Bloody_Stars]

It's kinda like 2 poems in 1. Basically how I saw it, the first one is the surface and the second is detailed. Can't describe it much but I love it! It's another great piece from you! :)

[Aileen]

i like it. verry nicly done. i've bin into the whole vampire thing myself of late.
your friend
Aileen

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Like the duality and the way you formatted the poem. well done!
FF