the dumbstrucked feelings

In the slurry of emotions

i find myself clutched,

how do i express them,

i just not find the way...

left love stucked in rain,

depression was bathing in haste,

my tears hardly fell off,

now they are drowning in one reign...

Reviews

[Mrs Meggins]

Do you mean stuck in rain not stucked?
Also do you mean cannot find the way?

[nikita]

i mean stucked in rain
and yes..i cannot find the way.

[tarun]

nice but their is no end of emotions

[nikita]

thankyou tarun :)
but i havn't mentioned about the end of emotions,.,

[tarun]

yeah i know & i apprciate your efforts from the bottom of my heart..
what i mean emotions r endless but y is it so

[nikita]

because emotions are the vital part of human life. This is what that defines a human. How will you be able to support someone in its pain if you arn't able to feel its plight?

[S]

"left love stucked in rain"

those were my favorite lines! Very well written!

[nikita]

thanks sayrandhri :)