Twinkle Twinkle

**To the tune of "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star"

Twinkle twinkle little star
You're so big, yet you're so far
All alone, each night you cry,
In the darkness, "Why, oh why?"
Twinkle twinkle little star
You're so big, yet you're so far

When the night comes hope is gone,
All your hopes and dreams were wrong
Living life's a scathing blight
Those you laughed at you were right
Twinkle twinkle little star
You're so big, yet you're so far

Every single day you weep,
For life's joys aren't yours to reap
From your battles you won't rise,
All your trusts are based on lies,
Twinkle twinkle little star
You're so big, yet you're so far

All is lost, yet you don't stop,
How you're still there, I know not
Where your strength hides, I inquire,
Despite all odds, you're a raging fire
Twinkle twinkle little star
You're so big, yet you're so far.

Against the world, alone you stand,
No one offers a helping hand
I wish I was as strong as you,
To stand up strong, for the things you do
Twinkle twinkle little star,
With your guidance, I'll go far.

Reviews

[Kelly M.]

You turned around the song and twisted it uniquely into how you wanted it to be. You did very well in rhyming too! Keep it up! :)