Last Dance...

let's take this last dance together...

because i love how dancing with you makes me feel...

and as we dance...i hope you realize that...

i'm always gonna be a dreamer who dreams...

~i think to myself~

what makes me stay when our world falls apart...?

why can't i let go when i've just had about enough...?

~because~

i imagine "us" just like a flower...blossoming as it grows...

if you cut it off ... how beautiful the flower..you'll never know...

~as the music comes to a slow finish~

are we still in a closed hold embrace...?

or did my dreaming heart make a wish...

a wish that came true...

that we are finally face to face...

Author's Note

inspired by the ups and downs of being in a long distance relationship :-(

Reviews

[MOON]

Expressive lovely write. touching.

[N!LoC]

3 words that sounds like music to my ears.... thanks moon...

[An owl on the moon]

There is a powerful longing that you express through each line... the wishing and hoping to be together.. Been in a long distance relationship and it's so hard... but for love it's truly worth holding on.. and dreaming.

[N!LoC]

aww.. thanks for the positive words of wisdom... love is something that is always worth holding on to.. :-)

[revalatia]

beautifully written man :)

[N!LoC]

thank you! its always nice to hear that :-)