Between You And Me...

like a shooting star... across the midnight sky

once in a blue moon... so rare to see

a solar eclipse... a sunset like fire

just like amazing feelings... between you and me 

Author's Note

inspiration at it's best !

Reviews

[KeeD]

I liked this, its short, sweet and packs a lot of emotion in so few lines.

Every sentence relates with the other. It shows us that no matter how different, how unique, how amazing and rare we are.. we all have some sort of connection. Love in this case could be the connection you so beautifully speak about it.
Great Write. - Kee

[N!LoC]

thanks so much kee for your kind words ... & love always seems to be the case for me.. :-)

[Tasha]

Aww this is so sweet. Its short but packed full of emotions.

This is beautiful inspiration at its best. You described a connection between someone you love and the moon and other things. I thought this was truly beautiful and so sweet, bewonderful write.
~Tasha

[N!LoC]

i know :-) and when i see a beautiful full moon... i almost become like a werewolf for inspiration because its such a beautiful inspiring sight to behold

[Tasha]

That's always the best inspiration :)

[Tate Morgan]

I personally like rhyme and meter I think you did well .I am also a fan of short and sweet

[N!LoC]

Short and sweet ! That's right up my alley :-)