Hate...

Hate is such a strong word...

yet i could say things like “i hate you”

“f#ck” may sound even more absurd...

yet i still could curse and say “f#ck you”

the ignited fire burnt through my veins...

emotions ruptured in the heat of the moment...

the embers and ashes dispersed from the flames...

and the last thing on my mind was to feel any atonement...

YOU HURT ME IN WAYS & YOU DON’T EVEN REALIZE!!!

I TRY TO REASON BUT U JUST SAY THAT I CRITICIZE!!!

YOU CAUSE ME SUCH PAIN YET BLATANTLY APOLOGIZE!!!

I JUST WANT TO BE HEARD AND FOR YOU TO JUST RECOGNIZE...

how i truly care for you for reasons i can’t understand...

i fight out of passion because i believe i can get through...

but through all my drama please don’t ever misunderstand...

HATE = i want to Hold And Tenderly Embrace you...

Author's Note

a lttle bit of epilogue and story, a little bit of rage and anger and a little bit of hope... but always with love

Reviews

[KeeD]

How I hate this poem :P haha awesome stuff brother.

[N!LoC]

thank u soo much keegz :-)

[Ruth]

Words said but not lingered...hope shines through, this is excellent!

[N!LoC]

here is a little fact for ya.... (those words were actually never said.. but it actually did linger through my mind)... so thats why i had to put those feelings out on writing... to get a clear conscience :-)

[Ruth]

:)

[StatAnimalLover]

Very nice, I could feel the anger.

[N!LoC]

Oh yeah! I was damn angry when I wrote this ... :-p

[Tate Morgan]

The difference betwween hate and love is acceptance and rejection

[N!LoC]

Interesting..... :-)

[Seanh12]

Wow i loved it! as very good it had so much emontions and feelings in.

H-hold A- and T-tenderly E-mbrace. Wow such good words.

it was really good and a great read. The image was great and set the tone. Well done

[N!LoC]

you said "good" 3 times... so it really must be GOOD !!! lol.... and yes... the best part about posting poems online... is hunting google images to find the most appropriate and meaningful picture to accompany the writing !

[Seanh12]

good and yes it was really good i loved it.

[s y e]

Wow. Loved it!

H-hold A-and T-tenderly E-mbrace.

Wow. That was good!

[N!LoC]

(Giggle giggle) thanks a bunch noodle head :-)

[s y e]

Ahahaha, cute. Your welcome. ;) Anytime.

[Muse]

HATE = i want to Hold And Tenderly Embrace you

wow...your perception on this emotion is beautiful and wise.

Great penning!

[N!LoC]

i also have MARIAH carey to thank for her inspiring song... H.A.T.E.U :-)
thanks for the review!

[Muse]

I love it when music inspires!

[Serenity Faith]

An unexpected end. Though i can fully relate, or well i used to...please write when you can express the feeling of nothing. As im still tryin to put it into words. I once loved someone with all my heart, but there were times i truly thought i hated him, because he had hurt me so bad and didnt realize to what extent. Then he hurt me for the last time, or well i guess my heart just decided it was the last time, because i couldnt deny what i saw with my own eyes. Now i feel that if he was lyin in a ditch, i wouldnt kick him, but neither would i help him...its hard to process sometimes. Your poetry struck home for me. Brilliant.

[N!LoC]

yes thanks you for that wonderful review and insight... i must say that everyone has their own interpretations when reading poems such as this one...but yeah... the title and ending of this poem is totally unexpected right? haha... i always try to end my poems on a positive note... (not always but most of the times)

[An owl on the moon]

You dance the dark and light words and feelings so well. So much that happens in our hearts and heads is absolutely beyond mere reason... It digs in so deep.

[N!LoC]

how deep i can dig... all resolves around the inspiration where i draw from... thanks for your lovely review :-)

[Nikki Hughes]

Really good. Your best one yet

[N!LoC]

best one yet... wow... i hope i have more "best one yet"s to come....