Hold Me In Your Arms...

 

Hold me in your arms...

And take my pain away...

All the hurt be gone...

To have a better day...

Tuck me in my bed...

And kiss me on my cheek...

Sing me a loving lullaby...

And hold me as I sleep...

Wipe away my tears...

Help make my life worth living...

Tell me that I am strong...

And never stop believing...

Please hold me in your arms...

I need to feel you now...

You always make my day...

Brighter...

Some way...

Some how...

Author's Note

a longing ..... put into words....

Reviews

[Winchester Saltgunner]

that was so beautiful! you kno you are so lucky to feel that way!

[N!LoC]

yes ... but ironicaly ... i havent really "felt" this literally... physically ... but at least i feel it emotionally :-)

[Winchester Saltgunner]

yes hun lol jus keep ur head up

[Kenzi Griffin]

Awe

[N!LoC]

................. :-)

[Jonathan Biswell]

i think with some more work this could become a song nice emotion in it

[N!LoC]

Haha song writing... That's one thing I would love to do ... But find it quite hard to come up worh a decent melody ... Thanks for stopping by Jon :-)

[Jonathan Biswell]

I think you can do it you will never know unless you try / (^.^)

[Mike Cole]

"Help make my life worth living...
Tell me that I am strong...
And never stop believing..."
Very powerful words and what stood out to me most about your piece I was very impressed by your rhyme scheme and really enjoyed it

[N!LoC]

Oh wow thank u so much .... Such nice words from u .. Xoxo's ! (Giggle giggle)

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
You are - changing fonts ?
As for the poem, it's very nice. It makes me think of a Mother's love for her little boy. And sometimes, that Mother's love is just what is needed to make the tears go away. And thank you for that, N!loc ... :)

[N!LoC]

The fonts went all crazy because I write this on my phone app and then when I cut and pasted it all jumbled up... And I was too lazy to type it out again ... And it's quite amazing how this can be quite universal because I didn't write it thinking about a mothers love at all but after u pointed it out ... Wow I realized that it could be too !

[dw817]

Well my 2nd Mother is also my G/F. Life is funny like that sometimes, isn't it ? *Grin* So - yes, perhaps I saw this as both ways.

The easiest way to fix this if you want to use Writer Cafe's own editor is to highlight all the text. Select a font you DON'T want, then the font you DO want. Then select a font size you DON'T want, then you DO want.

You have to select the one you don't want first cause if you only select the one you DO want, if WC thinks there is already a match (and it does make mistakes on this), it won't change all of it, or only partially some of it.

So you have to do wrong, then right. Nasty. With a WYSIWYG editor you can disable font styles entirely until you are ready for publication which does make it a little easier for final presentation.

Hope This Helps !

[N!LoC]

Oh ok thanks !!!!

[dw817]

UBetcha ! You can also find a bit of a tutorial on topics Here too:
http://bit.ly/10yeqst
read moreUBetcha ! You can also find a bit of a tutorial on topics Here too:
http://bit.ly/10yeqst
Hang in there ! :)

[plainme]

Cute, very cute poem. I like how it all falls together, the rhymes, the content and I love the way you've broke the last line into pieces. Well done!

[N!LoC]

Yeah! I never really realized how I "broke" the last line into pieces... How observant of ya ! Lol thanks plAinme :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sweet poem N!LoC. Sometimes quick writes work, as this one did

[N!LoC]

Thanks Rico ... u know how sweet I am :-)

[Frieda P]

Sounds like a lovely lullaby N!LoC....

[N!LoC]

Thanks fri fri... I wrote this one in like 5 minutes... And I'm very proud of how inspiration just strikes me :-)

[Pradeep]

Its was good reading it , lovely lines.........

[N!LoC]

Thank u so much Pradeep !