Too Far...

you shine your light on our oceans apart...

glimmering bright, such a #beautiful star...

tonight is the exception, you have stolen my heart...

but the fact remains that you’re just too far...

too far to touch...

too far to hold...

too far to tell...

if love can unfold...

up above the world so high...

like a diamond in the sky...

twinkle twinkle little star...

the fact remains you’re just too far...

Author's Note

my take on twinkie little star... hihi

Reviews

[Winchester Saltgunner]

2 words SADNESS-And beautiful i love the twist of emotions

[N!LoC]

Thanks so much schizo !

[Winchester Saltgunner]

lol your welcome





p.s. im bipholar

[Tate Morgan]

A sadness I once shared with a girl in Ireland.Something about the distance I guess

[N!LoC]

oh gosh thank u!... yes.. i did write this thinking about my own story and dealing with the distance... im so happy that alot can relate to it.... :-)

[Tate Morgan]

it is always more interesting when one writes of reality

[Jonathan Biswell]

I might have said this before but once you get a b/f I am sure you are going to spoil him with poems

[N!LoC]

Hahahaha.... Oh Jon.. If you only knew .... But yeah... Boy friends can DEFINATELY get the creative juices flowing... Thanks for reading Always !

[Jonathan Biswell]

always :PPPP

[Baby Ricochet]

Reminds me of how much I missed my now long gone X wife when I was deployed. Great, bittersweet poem N!LoC

[N!LoC]

It's great that my poem can remind you of feelings of yesteryear ... Thanks Rico

[Kenzi Griffin]

I love it. The rhyming lets it flow perfectly and it's really relatable. Good job!

[N!LoC]

Thanks a bunch Kenzi !

[Kenzi Griffin]

Anytime! Keep sharing your writing with me! I love reading your work!!

[Laminators Dubai]

Haha
Really nice one n!loc ^^
Sad but awesomeex. : )

[N!LoC]

Thanks glitch .. Sad can be nice too right?? Lol

[Laminators Dubai]

Yup. Sad can be great in poem but not in life...feel so sick. you should check my New poem 12:08am
sickly psycho...and sad too.

[Frieda P]

I like your rendition N! Sounds like a long distance affair of the heart....always a tough one.

[N!LoC]

Long distance ! Aha! That's DEFINATELY the word of the day ... (Giggle giggle) ... Thanks frie :-)