Your Bad...

i saw it coming...  it’s not any surprise...

i wanted to believe... but i knew all was a lie...

how good of an act? yes... i’m still amazed...

told all your stories... just glad i wasn’t phased...

you said you were good...

you said you were nice...

you said you were everything...

so i rolled the dice...

now disappear into dust... forget we never met...

move on to your next... someone more stupid i bet...

although the thought of "us"... i’ll admit was sublime...

it really could’ve been... so it’s “your bad”... not mine...

Author's Note

this was so easy to write... mainly because i was feeling it... ooo spite.. anger... betrayal...

Reviews

[Lil♥Beauty♥Bunni♥]

Beautiful I have felt like that

[N!LoC]

Why thank u bunni! ;-)

[Kenzi Griffin]

I adore this poem so much! It has amazing flow and the rhyming...My heart just fell in love with this, especially since it's so relate-able. I praise you on this! Good job, great job, amazing job!!

[N!LoC]

Oh my gosh thank u so so so much ... Kenzi

[Kenzi Griffin]

[dw817]

What happened, Niloc ?

[N!LoC]

Oh ... Just sometimes some people can be such liars who talk the talk and then just suddenly disappear without any reason ... And this one person really made me so pissed I had to just vent it out

[dw817]

Hope you are feeling better for it now. We all have our stalkers and many times they can be wild liars. *SIGH* Life gives you the good, the bad, and the ugly. As of recent though I think one assailant might well be bad and ugly. :D

[Baby Ricochet]

Good flow and rhyme. "someone more stupid I bet" feels a bit clumsy though.

[N!LoC]

Thanks Rico! :-)

[Laminators Dubai]

that was easy to read and understand too. played with your emotions and pushed all you bottons...daah ....
there's no expiation...its black and white...clear...nice job...impressive too.^^

[N!LoC]

If only I was blonde , could play guitar and sing ... I would be a "Taylor swift" lol

[Laminators Dubai]

...and then i wish to be a deaf....lol

[N!LoC]

HAHAHAGAHAHSHAHA !!!!